D#13 HW#2 Paragraph Analysis

1.)
*intro, define, establish point of view.
*defines the topic.
*intro.
*nothing above.
*introduces topic that will be further discussed.
*nothing above.
*not so sure just jumps right into it (is that bad?).
2.)
*define from other view that is the same backs up my beliefs.
*credible source. point from a young person.
*my own similar/different experience.
*again jumped right into the next source.
*i used however to transition to my own thought and opinions.
3.)
*explain my own point, credibility, and experience.
*same
*same
*similar/different than Jessica's experience
*same overall opinion
*opposite side of the argument
*however to start my personal thoughts
*differing views no real solid transition
4.0
*discuss opposite points in the source above
*credible source
*credible source
*yet another side of the spectrum
*bi transition just raw facts
5.)
*government role
*solid source reliable facts
*solid source reliable facts
*opposite theory
*sane idea on a different level
*bi solid transition just fact
*sane idea different level
6.)
*local government
*hit people close to home
*hot people close to home
*same idea different level
*discuss more liberal views
*none
*in addition
7.)
*discuss liberal views
*well known person
*well known person
*opposite view
*leads to conclusion
*In addition
*leads to conclusion
8.)
*conclusion
*sums up thoughts and ideas
*sums up thoughts and ideas
*sums up thoughts
*nothing below
*no transition
*nothing below