the two areas I'm concerned about with my cluster mess, is just that, over all it's a mess. I really need to focus on how to bring it all together in a coherent way. Also i think I'm lacking in my thesis statement. It needs to have more meat to it. but i will attempt to answer these questions even though i feel like they don't apply.
1. more info on people who don't agree with the topic in general, maybe info from parents bad experiences with sex education in schools...
2. Shared my cluster mess with my sis, she is pretty smart and she thinks it's fine.
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