Thursday, September 24, 2009

D#5 HW#3 Paragraph Analysis

1.)
*The point of my 1st paragraph was to introduce my topic.
*This paragraph functions in the argument by providing an introduction. Explaining to the reader where the paper is going.
*As a whole the paragraph functions in the paper as a whole by introducing not only the topic, but setting the tone and direction of the argument.
*There is no paragraph above to relate to.
*This paragraph relates to the one below because it introduces the idea of my own connection to the topic which is then discussed below.
*There is no paragraph to transition from above.
*This paragraph transitions to the one below by summing up the central ideas and discussing my personal experiences.
2.)
*The point of this 2nd paragraph was to express some of my personal ideas on the topic, as well as discuss my personal experience with it.
*This paragraph functions in the argument by providing my personal opinion, and experience, in an effort to back up the argument.
*As a whole the paragraph functions in the paper as a whole by following a sequence of ideas i wanted to discuss regarding the topic.
*The paragraph relates to the paragraph above by expanding on my personal experiences.
*This paragraph relates to the one below because its part of the paper, but i just reread it and realized it should be switched with the one below.
*This paragraph transitions from the one above by introducing my explanation of experience with the topic. realizing now i could have used a transition phrase or word.
*This paragraph doesn't even really transition to the one below because i should switch them.
3.)
*The point of this paragraph is to explain my purpose in writing this paper and doing the research.
*This paragraph functions in the argument by explaining why I'm arguing the point that I am.
*The paragraph functions in the paper as a whole by tieing the argument together by making it a valid point.
*This paragraph relates the the one above in general however I think now that they should be switched.
*The paragraph relates to the one below by leading into yet another point of my argument.
*This paragraph transitions from the paragraph but not very well they should be switched.
*This paragraph transitions to the one below by leading into another part of my argument.
4.)
*The point of his paragraph is back up my opinion on my topic by giving the audience my perspective.
*The paragraph functions in the argument by expressing my opinion.
*The paragraph functions in the paper as a whole by backing up my opinion.
*This paragraph relates to the paragraph above because it delves past my purpose and starts proving a point.
*This paragraph relates to the paragraph below but not very well I think it should be Placed after my 3rd paragraph which will be moved to my 2nd.
*This paragraph transitions from the paragraph above but not so well it should be switched.
*This paragraph doesn't transition well to the paragraph below because they are out of order.
5.)
*The point of this paragraph is to describe my focused audience and how they will perceive things.
*This paragraph functions in the argument by explaining my audience.
*This paragraph functions in the paper as a whole by giving my audience a place in the topic.
*This paragraph relates to the paragraph above but would make more sense if it came before.
*This paragraph relates to the paragraph below by discussing how the audience might feel towards the topic.
*This paragraph doesn't transition well from the one above i need to rearrange it.
*This paragraph transitions to the one below because it flows right into why the topic is controversial.
6.)
*The point of this paragraph is to explain why the topic is controversial.
*This paragraph functions in the argument by introducing the idea of having different views on the topic.
*This paragraph functions in the paper as a whole the same way by identify the fact that people do have differing pinions.
*This paragraph relates to the one above because it is a controversial topic to my audience.
*This paragraph relates to the one below by explaining why the audience and controversy contributes to the limitations I will have.
*This paragraph transitions to the one above because it ties the audiences' ideas into the controversy.
*This paragraph transitions to the one below because it explains why the controversy and audience leads to limitations.
7.)
*This point of this paragraph is to explain the limitations in the research i will conduct.
*The paragraph functions in the argument by recognizing what issues may arise during the research process.
*This paragraph functions in the paper as a whole bu summing up the main ideas and providing a conclusion.
*This paragraph relates to the one above by explaining the how the controversy and limitations relate.
*There is no paragraph below.
*This paragraph transitions from the one above by expanding on the idea of limitations.
*There is no paragraph below.

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