D#13 HW#4 Reflection of Peer Review

I did a peer review on summers paper, since she is the only other person with a draft up. I thought it was cool to read her paper after following her blog so closely this semester. i think she is on the right track. I realized that i should probably read my draft all the way through for clarity before i submit a final. (if you can believe it i didn't do that lol!) The comment summer left on my paper did not surprise me at all. she is 100% right, i need to clean up my intro and cite things better. once again turnitin.com has given me a little message saying you instructor has not chosen to allow students to view originality reports. so since i don't know what it says i wouldn't know which areas to work on. oh well.